Your gong fu has a lot of good and bad points, but I'd like to draw particular attention to problems in your footwork.
你的功夫优点和缺点并存,但我希望你能特别要注意你的步法。
Don't tie it to that old branch. I think it'll break. Tie it to the one on the right.
别把它绑在那根老树枝上。我想它会断的。把它绑在右边的树枝上。